Wow Reid, this is really good; I love the examples you used and simplified it well, using the screenshots from the lesson was a really innovative idea, the Maths was interesting and I loved the background; for next time maybe you could try and fix your writing so it makes more sense.
Hi Reid is's me Jason from Paroa school, I really liked that it is short and in gets the point across. It is good that there are two things like time tables and the cube one.
Hello Reid, This is a nice DLO you've made here but I've spotted a error at the end where the timetables is you put 7:45 + 11 = 7:53 Which is wrong that time would 8 minutes instead of 11 apart from that good work!
Hi Reid its Liam I like the different format of this DLO but next time could you please check your grammar. Thanks Bye :)
ReplyDeleteWow Reid, this is really good; I love the examples you used and simplified it well, using the screenshots from the lesson was a really innovative idea, the Maths was interesting and I loved the background; for next time maybe you could try and fix your writing so it makes more sense.
ReplyDeleteCarter.
thanks Carter :D
DeleteHi Reid is's me Jason from Paroa school,
ReplyDeleteI really liked that it is short and in gets the point across. It is good that there are two things like time tables and the cube one.
Your sincerely Jason
Thanks Jason :)
DeleteHello Reid, This is a nice DLO you've made here but I've spotted a error at the end where the timetables is you put 7:45 + 11 = 7:53 Which is wrong that time would 8 minutes instead of 11 apart from that good work!
ReplyDelete- Harley