Friday, 23 June 2017

WALT: use similes and alliteration in our writing we show not tell writing enjoyed doing to about my dog I found challenging I could hear the humans Munching their food - crunching, slurping, chewing I was waiting for the humans to give me my food. I Saw yellow hair and ginger hair and two other people looking huger than they were. I Felt soft Carpet inside and the cold wood when I went outside. and The people are super nice and they scratch me. I Wondered when my next meal would be? Where do they go when they leave home? to be btb need more words

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