Wednesday 29 April 2020

Writing matariki

 I think the past year has been crazy for me and my family for one reason is that we are moving house and that was to this day is till going on and this COV 19 how crazy is go the whole world

1 comment:

  1. Hi Reid,
    So this is a start, however this shouldn't be your entire reflection. Firstly, please introduce your writing by talking about Matariki. Why does Matariki mean you should be reflecting on your year?Then you can split your writing into paragraphs which focus on reflecting on different aspects...like school, family, social etc. I look forward to seeing your revised version.
    Mrs Gibson

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.